Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

A Night Out

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Still autumn night —
each patch of the forest,
full of darkness. /vs

Blanket of velvet-gray fog — /zh.r
a crow pierces the silence. /vs

Coffee aroma
permeates the morning air —
sudden rain... /zh.r

Archive Id: 1
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: August 10-25, 2007

Theme: Permeating
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Autumn night
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Stillness / Silence
Links 2/3: Crow / Rain (Interruption)
Links 3/1: Morning / Night

Notes: In verse 1 the theme reference is the darkness permeating the forest. In verse 2 it is the fog permeating. In verse 3 it is the coffee aroma.