Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Skaters Hold Hands

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Hortensia Anderson (ha)

Across blue skies —
ice crystals in cirrus clouds
go flying. /ha

Skaters at the pond hold hands — /ha
a chilly breeze fills the air. /vs

He pours her a cup
of marshmallows and cocoa —
pine wood flames. /vs

Archive Id: 7
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Hortensia Anderson: USA
Written:: January 6-14, 2008

Theme: Filling
Season: Winter
Kigo: Ice crystals; Skaters; Chilly breeze; Cocoa by a fire
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Movement (Ice crystals / Skaters & Breeze).
Links 2/3: Chilly breeze / Warming flames.
Links 3/1: Marshmallows / Cirrus clouds.