Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Along a Highway

A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

"Are we there yet?"
on the way to grandma's —
packages galore. /bk

A hitch-hiker holds a card — /vs
the dog's ears flap in the wind. /bk

A truck whizzes by —
the loose tarp exposes
a bed and chair.

Archive Id: 11
Betty Kaplan: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: January 30, 2008

Theme: Along a highway; Anticipation
Season: Winter
Kigo: Christmas gifts
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Package / Card.
Links 2/3: Flapping in the wind.
Links 3/1: Traveling vehicle.

Notes: The Anticipation theme is referenced in verse 1 with the kid's anticipating their destination, verse 2 with the hitch-hiker waiting for a ride, and verse 3 as the people moving look forward to their move.