Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Spring Signatures

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Brier branch —
a tuft of hair from
a Speckled goat. /vs

Snow patches here and there — /vs
green arrows of daffodils. /zh.r

New grass —
her polka-dot dress
picks up a stain. /zh.r

Archive Id: 13
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: April 16-20, 2008

Theme: Patches/Speckled
Season: Spring
Kigo: Snow patches; Daffodils; New grass
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Sharp points (Brier / Arrows).
Links 2/3: Green (Daffodil shoots / Grass).
Links 3/1: Grass / Tuft.