Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

You and Me

A Renhai by Karina Klesko (kk) & Gillena Cox (gc)

School-friends whisper —
a chookie chong dipping
in and out of clouds. /kk

Children's concert in the park — /kk
smiling faces, proud mums. /gc

Early morning —
only the tropical mocking bird
walking on the pavement. /gc

Archive Id: 22
Karina Klesko: USA
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Written:: May 8, 2008

Theme: Bonding; Appreciation
Season: Spring
Kigo: Kite flying
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Persons (School friends / Children).

Links 2/3:
Open spaces (Park / Pavement);
Persons (Children / Bird watcher).

Links 3/1:
Transient acts (Bird walking / Kite dipping);
Persons (Bird watcher / School children)

Notes: Verse 1: "Chookie chong dipping" is type of kite flying in Trinidad, see:

http://tinyurl.com/4yqqey