Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Just Cool

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Trish Shields (ts)

The workmen take
long draughts from water bottles —
near noon. /gc

Mud at the construction site — /gc
finger paintings on the fridge. /ts

A fan blows
across a map of Hawaii —
the empty piggy bank. /ts

Archive Id: 35
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Trish Shields: Canada
Written:: May 12-13, 2008

Theme: Keeping Cool; Cooling
Season: Spring
Kigo: Mud
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Workmen / Construction site; Waterbottles / Fridge.
Links 2/3: Fridge / Fan; Mud / Pig.
Links 3/1: Fan blows / Draughts (wordplay).