Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

A Faint Sound of Thunder

A Renhai by Karina Klesko (kk) & Gerry Bravi (gb)

Adobe walls —
sharp edges of a cold stone
mirror the dawn sun. /gb

Deep pink bloom of the desert — /kk
wind stirs a pinion's branches. /gb

An old woman
laces a wicker cradle —
seed-planting. /kk

Archive Id: 39
Karina Klesko: USA
Gerry Bravi: Canada
Written:: May 14, 2008

Theme: Desert; Mud; Adobe
Season: Spring
Kigo: Seed planting
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Sharp edges / Pinion tree branch (pine).
Links 2/3: Bloom / Birth, seed-planting; Pink / Baby girl.
Links 3/1: Adobe walls / Cradle; Soil for seed planing / Mud.