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Butterfly Effect

A Renhai by Daniela Bullas (db) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

A spider's silk web —
silver drops of dew sparkle
in the morning sun. /vs

Blossom blizzard floods the street — /db
on the child's nose, a petal. /vs

The silence broken —
Achoo! A tiny big bang
butterfly effect. /db

Archive Id: 48
Daniela Bullas: United Kingdom
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: May 19-21, 2008

Theme: Delicate Beauty
Season: Spring (Late)
Kigo: Blossom blizzard
Verse Form: 5-7-5, 7-7, 5-7-5 (Syllable)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Dew drops / Floods.
Links 2/3: Nose / Sneeze.
Links 3/1: Insect (Butterfly / Spider).

Notes: Delicate beauty:
    -V.1: Dew drops on a spider web
    -V.2: Petal, blossoms
    -V.3: Tiny sneeze; Butterfly