Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Reverie

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Lily candles
in an indoor pond —
sound of bubbles. /gc

His fishing boat out at sea — /vs
a yellow cloud mass drifting. /gc

Day dreaming
of our summer together —
champagne in Venice. /vs

Archive Id: 51
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Written:: May 26-30, 2008

Theme: Adrift
Season: Spring
Kigo: Lily
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Pond / Sea.
Links 2/3: Boats (Fishing boat / Venice canal boats).
Links 3/1: Bubbles (Sound of bubbles / Bubbles in champagne).

Notes: In verse 3, the theme is attested in that one is adrift in his day-dreaming thoughts.