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As They Sleep

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A bright half-moon
as I start the early shift —
vacant street.   

Empty Doughnut shop —   
a police car rolls up.   

A full moon
rises behind an oak —
leafless branches.   

Archive Id: 84
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: October 25-27, 2008

Theme: Bare/Empty; Night-related
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Moon, Leafless
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Street/Car.
Links 2/3: In front / Behind; Rolling up / Rising.
Links 3/1: Lunar.

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