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Crossing Overhead

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A high-flying jet
intersects honking geese —
southward bound.   

His toy airplane again   
misses the old cat.   

The police chopper
circles back overhead —
dead of night.   

Archive Id: 89
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: October 30, 2008

Theme: Aircraft; Faux-danger
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Geese flying south
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Creature (Geese / Cat).
Links 2/3: Repitition.
Links 3/1: Quiet / Honking; Circle back / Straight ahead.

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