Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Moist Potentials

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

The sound of a slap...
on the beaver pond's surface
ripples radiate. /vs

A steep coastal cliff — /vs
playing the thermals, a hawk. /jt

Steam engine —
above the buried coalfields
a rising fog. /jt

Archive Id: 93
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Janice Thomson: Canada
Written:: November 11-15, 2008

Theme: Harnessing Nature's Power
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Rising fog
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Dam / Cliff; Swim / Fly.

Links 2/3: Rising (Hawk / Fog); Thermal (Wind / Steam);
Playing / Working (Bird / man).

Links 3/1: Radiate / Rising; Enterprising: Beaver / Human;
Under: Beaver / Coal.