Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Autumn's End

A Renhai by Yvonne Myers (ym) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Dying leaves
from a fragrant tree fall on
the welcome mat. /ym

Clouds heavy with snow — /vs
mouths of children open, waiting /ym

First flakes —
a young girl marks out
a happy face. /vs

Archive Id: 99
Yvonne Myers: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: November 22 - December 2, 2008

Theme: Falling; Welcoming
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Dying leaves; First flakes
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Flat (Mat / Clouds); Below/Above (Mat /Clouds).
Links 2/3: Children.
Links 3/1: A sign or a message ("Welcome" / Happy face).

Notes:
The theme of Welcoming appears as follows:
Verse 1: Welcome mat
Verses 2 & 3: Children embracing/welcoming winter.