Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

The Night Before

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Winter bedtime —
the last child tucked in
for the night. /vs

Rising smoke from chimneys — /vs
distant mountain veiled in fog. /jt

Blazing fire —
children's gifts wrapped between
sips of cocoa /jt

Archive Id: 107
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Janice Thomson: Canada
Written:: December 17-21, 2008

Theme: Comfy, Warm Feeling; Concealed
Season: Winter
Kigo: Winter bedtime, Smoke from chimneys, Gifts wrapped
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Descending (going to bed) / Rising (smoke).
Links 2/3: Smoke / Fire.
Links 3/1: Children.