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Pilgrim

A Renhai by Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Frozen pond —
a faint figure approaches
through the fog.   /vs

Each pattern glitters —   /vs
a name in the frosted window.   /vj

Misty eyed
she bids farewell —
fading moon.   /vj

Archive Id: 124
Dr. Vidur Jyoti: India
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: February 15-27, 2009

Theme: Obscured
Season: Winter
Kigo: Frosted window; Frozen pond
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Misty / Frosted; Fading / Glittering.
Links 2/3: Frosted / Frozen; Unknown person.
Links 3/1: Leaving / Arriving; Misty / Foggy.

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