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The Day I Left the Cloud

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Rolling, tumbling...
I land on a plane's windshield —
the pilots don't smile. /vs

Free fall, the wind pushes me — /vs
I merge with a look-alike. /zh.r

Splash-bouncing
into the ocean's surface,
I lose track of myself... /zh.r

Archive Id: 133
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: March 16-24, 2009

Theme: A Raindrop's View
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Windshield / Wind.
Links 2/3: Joining together.
Links 3/1: Movement (Splash-bouncing / Rolling, tumbling).

Notes: This is from the perspective of a raindrop and was written for young readers.