Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Commuting Time

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Karina Klesko (kk)

Setting sun —
His pocket watch swings
back and forth. /kk

Old windmill on the hill — /vs
Cambridge ewes and lambs grazing. /kk

A thousand stars —
arriving just as the train
pulls away. /vs

Archive Id: 143
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Karina Klesko: USA
Written:: March 24 - April 21, 2009

Theme: Passing Time; Obsolescence
Season: Spring
Kigo: Lambs
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Hands / Arms.
Links 2/3: Old / Modern; Grazing / Waiting for the subway.
Links 3/1: Motion; Lateness.

Notes: The middle verse contains a sort double meaning: the type of sheep and the name of a university that bred them (Cambridge).