Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Understanding

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Tidy cupboards —
each fruit can on the shelf
facing outward. /jt

Apple sauce on toast — /vs
the kids avoid my eyes. /jt

Farmers market —
under stalls a boy looks for
other life forms. /vs

Archive Id: 145
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Janice Thomson: Canada
Written:: April 20-23, 2009

Theme: Deviant Behaviour; Food
Season: Non-Winter
Kigo: Farmers market
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Fruit (On shelf / On toast); Avoiding certain directions.
Links 2/3: Kids / Boy; On top / Underneath.
Links 3/1: Stalls / Cupboards; Untidy / Tidy.