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Looking Up, Down

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

An alpine hut
near the mountain's summit —
long climb's end.   

Old limestone basilica —   
moss at the wall's base.   

The toddler's hands
reach up toward grampa's
empty lap.   

Archive Id: 147
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: April 22-30, 2009

Theme: Old and New
Season: Non-Winter (Spring/Summer)
Kigo: Alpine climbing; Moss
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Building; Top / Bottom.
Links 2/3: At the base.
Links 3/1: Climbing.

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