Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Onset

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Wedding march —
rose peals precede
a bride's footsteps. /gc

Off to fetch the newspaper — /vs
first morning cloud, heavy grey. /gc

The last moment
of the grad ceremony —
mortars in the air... /vs

Archive Id: 154
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: May 22 - June 5, 2009

Theme: Mission
Season: Summer (Early)
Kigo: Wedding; Graduation
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Feet in motion.
Links 2/3: Cloud / In the air; Fetching / Flinging.
Links 3/1: Ceremony; Mortars / Peals; Flying up / Falling down.