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Midnight Stirrings

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Gibbous moon —
on every primrose leaf
a starlight dance.   /jt

Midnight velvet breeze —   /jt
a canopy of shining stars.   /vs

Pre-dawn stillness —
distant harbour lights
frolic on the ripples.   /vs

Archive Id: 155
Janice Thomson: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: February 5-22, 2009

Theme: Night Lights
Season: Spring (Late)
Kigo: Primrose leaf
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Moon / Stars.
Links 2/3: Midnight / Pre-dawn.
Links 3/1: Dance / Frolic.

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