Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Droppings

A Renhai by John W. Sexton (jws) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Honey sandwich
fumbled... which side
will turn up? /vs

Broken hive, a static of bees — /jws
droppings among bear tracks. /vs

Alcor, Mizar:
cartilage of ursine tail?
or just stars? /jws

Archive Id: 156
John W. Sexton: Ireland
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: February 5-25, 2009

Theme: Away From
Season: Summer
Kigo: Bear; Bees
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Honey / Bees; Dropped / Droppings.
Links 2/3: Bear / Ursine; Droppings / Bear's tail.
Links 3/1: Question; Up / Sky.

Notes: Theme references:

Verse 1: Falling Sandwich
Verse 2: Fleeing Bear
Verse 3: Distant constellation