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Now Here, Soon Gone

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

The odd cloud
here and there, the sun
pokes through.   /vs

Ladybug on my thumb tip —   /zh.r
a little friend, soon gone.   /vs

The young fawn
peeks from behind the bushes —
its "hi", "goodbye."   /zh.r

Archive Id: 157
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: February 25 - March 2, 2009

Theme: Departing
Season: Summer
Kigo: Ladybug; Fawn
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Spots (Clouds / Ladybug).
Links 2/3: Little / Young; Spots; Being observed / Observing.
Links 3/1: Peeks / Pokes.

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