Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Seaside Breeze

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Bright day —
a seagull, then another
lands nearby. /vs

The salty breeze on my face — /vs
carved slices of pineapple. /gc

Scalloped edges
of the table umbrella —
flapping, flapping... /gc

Archive Id: 158
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Written:: June 13-24, 2009

Theme: Breezy
Season: Spring (Dry season)
Kigo: Bright day; Table umbrella
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Seagulls landing / Breeze on the face.
Links 2/3: Faces / Round-shaped; Carved / Scalloped; Salty (air) / Sweet (pineapple).
Links 3/1: Flapping (Umbrella / Bird wings).