Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Portraits in the Sky

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Aurora borealis —
green glowing sheets
erupt in silence. /vs

Twin orbs in the sky... /jt
at each end of the lake /vs

Each wave
in the ocean wearing a halo —
sun dog. /jt

Archive Id: 159
Janice Thomson: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: June 5-19, 2009

Theme: Sky Phenomenon
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Arcing / At each end.
Links 2/3: Lake / Ocean; Sun; Reflections; Spheres.
Links 3/1: Wave-like; Surreal images.

Notes: Verse 1 is at night and verse 3 is in the day. The middle verse describes a phenomenon that is typically seen in the morning or the afternoon; that is, where the moon is rising/setting and the sun is doing the opposite at the other horizon.