Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

In the Thick of It

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Faint figures
sway mutely before me —
thoughts thicken. /jt

Earth and sky joined together — /jt
the sun, but a distant memory. /vs

Only the sound
of small lapping waves, and...
a muffled horn. /vs

Archive Id: 161
Janice Thomson: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: January 29 to February 2, 2009

Theme: Fog
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Fade into the background / Earth and sky joined.
Links 2/3: Joined (Earth & sky / Sounds).
Links 3/1: Sounds / Muted.