Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Fleeting Attractions

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Patch of phlox —
at each flower a bee
seems to hurry. /vs

Spider web, dew-jeweled — /zh.r
a butterfly flits and flutters. /vs

A young man
strolls through the mall —
flirty skirts. /zh.r

Archive Id: 162
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: February 6-24, 2009

Theme: Trying to Attract
Season: Summer
Kigo: Bee, Butterfly
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Insects; Round-shaped (Flower / Spider web); Flying.
Links 2/3: Web / Skirt.
Links 3/1: Strolling / Visiting each flower;
Attractive "clothing" (Skirts / Flowers).

Notes: Each verse and the title has one or more alliterations of the sound "FL".