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A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Buzzing bees
swarm around spirea
laden with pollen.   /vs

An ant scurries higher —   /vs
peonies scent the air.   /jt

Rose bramble —
a sated earwig sleeps
inside a bud.   /jt

Archive Id: 164
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Janice Thomson: Canada
Written:: June 19 - July 6, 2009

Theme: Insect / Floral encounters
Season: Summer
Kigo: Flowers; Insects
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Colony-type insects (Bees / Ants); Buzzing / Scurrying (Collecting)
Links 2/3: Up high / Deep inside.
Links 3/1: Sated / Laden; Blossom penetration.

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