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Never a Dull Moment

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

A car speeds off —
a pop can and a wrapper
added to the trash.   /vs

Distant thundering sounds —   /vs
wind shifts the surface dust.   /zh.r

Runover possum
on my gravel shoulder —
turkey vultures.   /zh.r

Archive Id: 165
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: June 28 - July 19, 2009

Theme: A Road's Perspective
Season: Summer
Kigo: Thunder
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: In the distance.
Links 2/3: Dust / Gravel.
Links 3/1: Something left behind.

Notes: This was written from the perspective of a road.

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