Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Sounds of Rebounding

A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Dazzling wall —
each voice of summer
reflecting off. /tk

Sudden heavy downpour — /vs
bounces on the roof. /tk

Glistening tans —
clearing the net, the ball
hits the sand. /vs

Archive Id: 166
Toshiaki Koike: Canada (formerly Japan)
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: June 17 - July 22, 2009

Theme: Bouncing
Season: Summer
Kigo: Voices of summer; Heavy downpour; Tans; Beach volleyball
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Wall / Roof.
Links 2/3: Wetness (Shower / Glistening tans).
Links 3/1: Dazzling / Glistening.