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A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Popped to Please

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

A buttery scent
emanates from the kitchen —
a three-voiced "Popcorn!" /zh.r

Each popped kernel, threaded... /vs
the garland hangs on her neck. /zh.r

The lights come on —
bits of popcorn on my lap
and in the seat. /vs

Archive Id: 167
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Zhanna P. Rader: USA
Written:: July 14-20, 2009

Theme: Popcorn
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Kids (three voices) / Mother or Grandmother.
Links 2/3: Body part (Neck / Lap).
Links 3/1: Room (Kitchen / Movie theater).