Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

On Board

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)

Window seat...
light then dark
dark then light. /bk

The smell of oiled timber — /vs
riding the rails, a runaway. /bk

He grabs her hand
as they rush the summit —
roller coaster. /vs

Archive Id: 169
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Betty Kaplan: USA
Written:: July 30 - Aug 7, 2009

Theme: Rails
Season: Summer
Kigo: Oiled timber smell; Roller coaster
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Railroad.
Links 2/3: Steal a ride / "Steal" a chance to hold hands.
Links 3/1: Light-dark / Up-Down; Sitting in seats.