Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Time Off

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Sunday evening crowd;
a steelband in the park plays
vintage music. /gc

Pink clouds through the church window — /gc
the hot breeze rustles a page. /vs

Summer holidays —
banana splits at the old
ice cream parlour. /vs

Archive Id: 170
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: June 13-24, 2009

Theme: Crowds; Time off
Season: Summer
Kigo: Summer vacation
Verse Form: Free
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Sunday / Church.
Links 2/3: Pink (Clouds / Strawberry ice cream); Hot / Cold.
Links 3/1: Vintage (Music / Parlour); Sundae / Sunday.