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A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Riverside
the marvel of mountains
and oceans.   /gc

At the baptismal font   /gc
a wee hand takes a scoop.   /vs

Reaching higher
she almost touches
the Big Dipper.   /vs

Archive Id: 177
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: September 12-19, 2009

Theme: Water
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Baptism, beginnings metaphor / Mountains & oceans: beginnings & endings.
Links 2/3: Scooping / Dipper; Wee hand / Big dipper.
Links 3/1: Marveling; Down on earth (ountains, oceans) / In the sky (constellation).

Notes: The Big Dipper, although a cluster of stars, evokes the sense of a real dipper for water.

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