Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Settling Down

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Seward (js)

Quiet playground —
an autumn breeze upon
the set of swings. /js

Between bicycle spokes, /vs
a scarlet maple leaf. /js

Caught in traffic —
switching stations to look
for better news. /vs

Archive Id: 181
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Janice Seward: Canada
Written:: October 4-11, 2009

Theme: Caught
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Fallen leaf; Autumn breeze
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Long verticals (Swings / Spokes).
Links 2/3: Bicycle / Traffic.
Links 3/1: Repeated motion (Switching / Swinging).