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Stepping Back

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)

A waning crescent
in the long dim corridor —
shuffling footfalls.   /vj

Barber's shop window —   /vs
a glance back in time.   /vj

Shoe-shiner's chair —
on the tip of my shoe,
the overhead light.   /vs

Archive Id: 186
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Dr. Vidur Jyoti: India
Written:: June 12 - November 18, 2009

Theme: Reflections
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Waning / Looking back; Square (Corridor / Window).
Links 2/3: Place of personal service for men (Barber shop / Shoe shiner).
Links 3/1: Overhead light / Dim corridor; Shoe / footfalls.

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