Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Latter Moments

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Christmas Eve —
from shop to shop between
singing carols. /jt

Juggling street busker — /vs
a hot-dog cart moves nearer. /jt

Paying the bills —
another month closer
to retirement. /vs

Archive Id: 197
Janice Thomson: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: December 2 - 7, 2009

Theme: Juggling
Season: Winter
Kigo: Christmas Eve
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Caroling / Busking.
Links 2/3: Nearer / Closer.
Links 3/1: Bills / Shopping.

Notes: The "hot-dog" verse was inspired for Janice one day in Victoria, BC. It was at the waterfront across from the Empress Hotel where all the street buskers assemble. A hot-dog cart moved in beside a juggler and while practicing, one of the juggler's rings landed in the ketchup on the cart's counter. The cart moved over to avoid further "gifts".