Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Out Shining

A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

High beams
stab into ice fog —
Passing car. /tk

Through an ice sculpture, /vs
falling long shadows. /tk

Festive lights —
he raises the last set
with a broom. /vs

Archive Id: 206
Toshiaki Koike: Canada (formerly Japan)
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: December 16, 2009 - January 6, 2010

Theme: Pushing In; Lights
Season: Winter
Kigo: Ice fog; Ice sculpture; Festive lights
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Penetrating light.
Links 2/3: Falling / Raising.
Links 3/1: Raising broom high / High beams.