Renhai Studio Archives

A Collection of Renhai by members of The Renhai Studio

Unsilence

A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

New year bonfire —
whistles from the tangled
poplar brush pile. /jm

A red-headed woodpecker — /jm
chop-chop, chop-chop, chop... /vs

Hot words and spittle
spew through the old man's
gray beard. /vs

Archive Id: 209
Jerry McKenzie: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: January 12-21, 2010

Theme: Emanating Sounds
Season: New Year
Kigo: New year bonfire
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Reverse

Links 1/2: Poplar / Woodpecker.
Links 2/3: Spewing / Pecking.
Links 3/1: Spittle / Sizzle; Brush / Beard.