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Rippling Petals

A Renhai by Janice Seward (js) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Together again —
overwhelmed by ripples
of pure joy.   /js

Gentle waves in the pond   /js
reflect in your eyes.   /vs

Floating rose petals,
each one carrying a message
from my heart.   /vs

Archive Id: 213
Janice Seward: Canada
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written:: February 8, 2009

Theme: Love; Waves
Season: Non-Winter
Kigo: Pond waves
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Rippling / Reflecting.
Links 2/3: Pond / Floating.
Links 3/1: Pure / Rose petals.

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