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Night Cruise

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

under full sail
a sudden swell tosses me
from rail to rail   /vs

moonlit coconut palms   /vs
bash of foamy white breakers   /gc

canopy of stars
which one will this night
pitch me a wish   /gc

Archive Id: 220
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Gillena Cox: Trinidad and Tobago
Written:: March 10-14, 2010

Theme: The Sea
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Swell / Breakers.
Links 2/3: Coconut palms / Canopy.
Links 3/1: Persona, 'me'.

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