Eros Haiku Series
CLI - CC

 

# / Author
Verse
CLI
Zhanna P. Rader
Watching as she takes
her lingerie off the clothes line —
a bluebird's song.
CLII
Dana-Maria Onica
The strange delight
of her scented letters —
it snows again
CLIII
Zhanna P. Rader
She closes her eyes
to inhale the rose's fragrance —
lips parting...
CLIV
Hugh Bygott
Was it in a dream
that she came to me in her naked beauty?
Spring dawn awakening —
CLV
Zhanna P. Rader
Day-dreaming of you —
the sun and the moon
in a cloudless sky.
CLVI
Michele Harvey
winter darkness
his fingertips
all eyes
CLVII
Zhanna P. Rader
The magic touch
of your fingertips —
moonlit fountains...
CLVIII
Dana-Maria Onica
Under his caresses
even the thorns become flowers —
when it comes time...
CLIX
Zhanna P. Rader
She accepts his rose...
and bleeds as the thorn
pricks her finger.
CLX
Robert D. Wilson
the dampness
of winter dreams...
oh moon!
CLXI
Zhanna P. Rader
The peach
in your warm hands ripens —
sweet juice on your lips.
CLXII
Robert D. Wilson
your smile
stretched across
a tree limb
CLXIII
Zhanna P. Rader
Valentine's Day —
a pigeon, running close
behind another one...
CLXIV
Dana-Maria Onica
Wildflowers in bloom —
I don't know him at all,
and yet I know...
CLXV
Zhanna P. Rader
Your glances
and the chemistry between us —
blossoming cherries.
CLXVI
Billie Dee
slipper moon
her kimono hem shushing
the breeze
CLXVII
Michele Harvey
all melted
from a glance
this winter's heart
CLXVIII
Zhanna P. Rader
Pine candles —
she suggests
a candlelight dinner.
CLXIX
Dana-Maria Onica
Sweet wine —
she takes off her sweater,
smiling
CLXX
Billie Dee
picnic
opening the perfect peach
sunlight on your thighs
CLXXI
Zhanna P. Rader
Sunny beach —
as we laugh, her navel
plays peek-a-boo.
CLXXII
Michele Harvey
whispers
shared
winter stars
CLXXIII
Dana-Maria Onica
Ebb and flow
in his eyes —
spring twilight
CLXXIV
Zhanna P. Rader
Jasmine gazebo —
she lets me see
her thigh tattoo.
CLXXV
Dana-Maria Onica
Nothing left
but a trace of Magie Noir —
first coffee
CLXXVI
Robert D. Wilson
she bows to the
broken needle
. . . remembering

Winter kigo: broken needle. (Harikuyou) Memorial service of needles… Harikuyou is a festival in Japan where people bring their old sewing needles, etc to retire them and thank them.

A woman pays homage to the broken sewing needle she has used and now must retire. My haiku is a metaphor for a woman looking longingly at her dying husband, remembering the good times they shared. Robert D. Wilson



Seems rather clear and obvious to me, and the explanation of the holy day in the Japanese calendar makes it even clearer. Belaboring the events around the needle's becoming broken, and belaboring the memories, would destroy the poignancy of the bow, which makes the inner spiritual significance of the memories clear. A needle is an attempt to repair or create, and that is broken. Remembering is either happy or sad, but remembering with a bow means it is significant, and the broken needle means there was a struggle, and effort, not something "pointless." Bowing is an effort at recognition and also deep acceptance of truth and faith in truth. This is a very focused set of verse with deep reverberations, and that is with out my knowing the specific Japanese context, given the context in the religious spiritual calendar, the meaning becomes clear and details are supplied by one's own memories of memories I think... Isa Kocher
CLXXVII
Hugh Bygott
Lips pressed; desire:
we seek the rhythm of the waves
. . . moonflowers at dusk.
CLXXVIII
Zhanna P. Rader
As we tango,
my heartbeat — a woodpecker's
drumming.
CLXXIX
Dana-Maria Onica
The blue
of his eyes —
winter sky
CLXXX
Michele Harvey
all rosy
winter crescent rising
and a moon
CLXXXI
Hugh Bygott
Wild violets —
tutor'd by Aphrodite
. . . his lips free her desire...
CLXXXII
Zhanna P. Rader
You discover me:
I become softer, weaker...
a twining sweet pea...

Now, "sweet pea" is a spring kigo, and, according to the Flower Symbolism list, stands for "delicate pleasure." Read more about flower symbolism:

http://www.weddingbokay.com/symbol.html or:
http://tinyurl.com/yjm3sb

Zhanna
CLXXXIII
Billie Dee
standing in the snow —
Rachmaninov spills
from her window
CLXXIV
Michele Harvey
encircled
by a curving embrace
and a new moon
CLXXXV
Zhanna P. Rader
Trampled grass —
guarded by a caterpillar,
her lost pearl earring...
CLXXXVI
Hugh Bygott
Lily in the moonlight —
How delicate is her love;
yet so easily lost.
CLXXXVII
Zhanna P. Rader
By the creek, she rolls
her stockings down and off —
a long-legged egret...
CLXXXVIII
Michele Harvey
lost in giggles
two rocks beneath
the springing stream
CLXXXIX
Zhanna P. Rader
Lilacs in bloom —
on her tight blouse,
two buds.
CXC
Michele Harvey
winter warmed
without a fire
sparks flying
CXCI
Zhanna P. Rader
Teach me,
passion flower,
all you know.

:)
CXCII
Vaughn Seward
winter wedding...
she steps out of the limo
in high heels
CXCIII
Zhanna P. Rader
Newlyweds' garden —
this time, he leaves his love note
in the jasmines.
CXCIV
Hugh Bygott
Darkly in thought,
I remember that embrace ...
Winter which scours and heals.
CXCV
Zhanna P. Rader
Willow limbs
caressing the brook's surface —
my skin aches for your touch.
CXCVI
Hugh Bygott
Plum blossoms opening —
I kiss her smooth bare legs
... New desires unfolding ...
CXCVII
Zhanna P. Rader
Drought-stricken willow —
your tender kisses
moisten my lips.
CXCVIII
Billie Dee
nippy afternoon
still she swings
her feathered fan

Lol! :)
Zhanna
CXCIX
Zhanna P. Rader
I offer new pants
to the scarecrow man —
the sparkle in his eyes!
CC
Hugh Bygott
A chance on a Spring day —
our eyes meet as we pass ...
this persisting desire.